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Hot Cheerleader Pussy!

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...and that was the last time Upchuck was allowed near the cheerleading squad. Turns out his idea of a cheerleading uniform was NOT what they were looking for.

EDIT: Made the lineart less sketchy, by removing those sketchy underlines. Britt looks a lot cleaner now... but still she's kinda pissed :)
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Very nice sketch work, although a bit of judicious eraser work to remove the preliminary strokes would not go amiss.

Your word balloon didn't unduly disrupt the visual, and you did a good job with it in terms of emphasizing Brittany's outrage and humiliation.

In terms of fitting story/background to the art, you make a simple outline the viewer can expand on, and it works for the same reason the sketch itself did.

You have a good "eye" for expression and proportion. (yes, kids, the heels would be that thick for even a fetish cheerleading outfit!)

You have a lot of potential, and it'll be interesting to see where you go with it in the future. (Good to see more *Daria*-inspired work, in any event!)